Wednesday, January 7, 2009

essay one- final combined prewrite- (this i beleive)

i believe-

topic sentence: Finding your niche in life is one of the most rewarding accompilishments life can offer. Some people have many, whether its a hobbie, a job, a role you play in your family as a mother or father, cooking, writing, sports, you name it, there is no other accomplishment that can bring you this much joy all of your life. It doesnt matter as long as you are interested in it and find it rewarding to explore the possiblilities of elevating your skill. Growing up ive noticed that everyone in my life has always had somthing they enjoy with all of their being, no matter how old they are. Observing others with such a niche, and aquiring my own has taught me that, no matter how many years or how much time per week a person spends indulging in their special interest, they always enjoyed every minute of it. You may move from one interest to another as you age but eventually everyone finds what their proud of. The thought of this has intrigued me for many years, you dont necessarily look for this calling but eventually you find it.
paragh 2- my nephew playing piano (8 year old boy) this demonstrates that any age can find there niche. he practices every day, takes lessons and loves playing in front of the family.
parahg 3-middle sister (lisa age 19) singing opera (shows a devotion of time, and how rewarding it is for her to improve and accomplish songs of differesnt languages and difficulty level. she has been interested in singing scince the 6th grade. and is veryy good. has song at the beneroya hall.
Paragh 4-brothers love of cars (example of a niche that you can improve and how it not only applies to cars but when backed with education prepares you for bieng good in other areas. for example Jason being good at mechanics is going through training to become a mechanic at boeing.
paragh 5-moms devotion as a christian. She didnt become a christian till she was 20 which is an example of how it somtimes takes a while but eventually you find the one thing that brings you joy.

Paragh 6- my grandma. most inspiring to me of all. this paragraph will explain how after finding the thing that makes you happy, u never get tired of it. shes been on different bowling leagues since she was in her twenties. She is now 86 and still continues to bowl twice a week on a leauge with people of all ages. She has an average of (170)which very good. she strives to be better every time she goes and continues to improve. she beats alot of the men that are on the league because she is sooooo good.

paragh 7- me finding my interst first in drums, then in sports, particularly basketball. This shows that you dont always find what your intersested in the first time around but that you eventually aquire somthing and stick with it. Basketball is my love ive been playing for school and recreational teams since 7th grade. It is a sport im planning on playing as long as my body is in good enough condition.

conclusion- summery of why finding what your good at in life is the most beinifitial thing that will bring the most joy to your life.

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